For my Grades essay, I got multiple comments which helped me revise my writing for my final draft. I got a few global revisions telling me to expand on a sentence because I stopped mid-thought, or to expand my idea more so it was clear what I was trying to say. These comments I found to be extremely helpful because I would have overlooked them, or assumed the reader knew where I was going with the thought.
Most of the comments I received however, were surface level revisions. I had punctuation errors, grammar mistakes, and some run- on sentences. I also found these helpful because I tend to overlook some mistakes so having another set of eyes is very helpful.
