My partner for this first peer review was Molly F. We used the guidelines we have used the last few times we did peer reviews as a guide of what to do this time. we focused on the Main argument, integration of sources, and evidence because we decided we both needed extra help in those …
for these sources I focused on what related to my main argument of how companies should not be selling data and marketing items as Safe. the notes I put were for me to go back and know what spots focused on these points and which ones didn’t
Looking back on the diary post of my phone I have been thinking of how often I use it and the apps I use the most. Looking at this data it made me think about how much time I waste on my phone and made me think about who I talk to. The people I …
One learning outcome I think I used during this project is integrating ideas. I took my idea of whether or not I thought social media was hurting your self esteem and sense of individuality and I integrated it in with the sources we used in class to create an essay that represents what I was …
