My partner for this first peer review was Molly F. We used the guidelines we have used the last few times we did peer reviews as a guide of what to do this time. we focused on the Main argument, integration of sources, and evidence because we decided we both needed extra help in those categories. Her comments on my post were very helpful and have given me a good start to my revision. If I could choose one category for extra help I think it would be the main argument to make sure I have chosen a side and stuck with it throughout the essay. I could bring this up in a one on one conversation by asking her to take another look at it to see how my new Main argument looks and if it is throughout the essay.
