My partner for this first peer review was Molly F. We used the guidelines we have used the last few times we did peer reviews as a guide of what to do this time. we focused on the Main argument, integration of sources, and evidence because we decided we both needed extra help in those …
for these sources I focused on what related to my main argument of how companies should not be selling data and marketing items as Safe. the notes I put were for me to go back and know what spots focused on these points and which ones didn’t
Looking back on the diary post of my phone I have been thinking of how often I use it and the apps I use the most. Looking at this data it made me think about how much time I waste on my phone and made me think about who I talk to. The people I …
One learning outcome I think I used during this project is integrating ideas. I took my idea of whether or not I thought social media was hurting your self esteem and sense of individuality and I integrated it in with the sources we used in class to create an essay that represents what I was …
When we first met, you were a shiny new toy. Much bigger than my last one. We had some issues in the beginning, I thought you didn’t like me, or want to be my friend. But two weeks later you turned around and we have been best friends ever since. You’re full of pictures that …
In today’s class I focused on the placement of commas in my social media essay. I decided to focus on this today because in the last essay we did I had a lot of run on sentences. My goal for this essay was to not have any or very few. I first started by reading …
This process for reading and annotating was better because I read the article in chunks and then went back re read them and annotated it in portions rather than reading the whole thing two times through or reading it once and annotating it while trying to read it. Reading it twice let me fully understand …
the three quotes I chose from Boyd’s “Identity” chapter are: “he used different style of speaking when he addressed white political leaders than when he addressed southern black congregation” “Why would a student lie to an admissions committee when the committee could easily find the truth online?” “by becoming anonymous and being an invisible part …
My fifteen minute reflection felt like a lifetime. I sat in my bedroom on Saturday morning to reflect on what I wanted to do that day and what goals I wanted to accomplish. During this time I thought about the week I had before hand and I thought about what I wanted to do during …
