In today’s class I focused on the placement of commas in my social media essay. I decided to focus on this today because in the last essay we did I had a lot of run on sentences. My goal for this essay was to not have any or very few. I first started by reading …
Rethinking my essay into the audio podcast was a little more challenging than I thought it was going to be because I was happy with my essay and I didn’t want to change it around. Once I got the podcast to work with my essay the task became easier and I was able to move …
The draft of my Reflective Learners was more about Ken Bain and Carol Dweck rather than being it about me. I added a lot of personal examples into the final draft which made it more personal and was able to focus more on myself and my learning styles with a hint of Bain and Dweck …
For my Grades essay, I got multiple comments which helped me revise my writing for my final draft. I got a few global revisions telling me to expand on a sentence because I stopped mid-thought, or to expand my idea more so it was clear what I was trying to say. These comments I found …
When I peer review, I read their paper once, then I go through again and start to make comments. I comment on anything I have an opinion on- it could be grammar errors, something I think needs clarity, something I think is unnecessary, anything that comes to mind while reading. I tend not to hold …
